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Friday, March 6, 2020

Essay Writing (Draft mode)

Hi bloggers!

We have been making Essay writing drafts and this is how mine turned out. Mine is alright for my first essay. We had to do out essays about waste of food and what we could so do stop or reduce it. here is my essay, comment if you think it good and you could try and help reduce the waste.


 


Hope you liked it sorry for the bad quality picture it was hard to get the whole lot in it. Hope you enjoyed reading this and learned more about waste and you can try and reduce wasting food. Bye. :)


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  1. AnonymousMarch 9, 2020 at 2:32 PM

    Hi Jack, good job on your essay writing draft. The waste of food is an awesome topic to do it on, as we waste so much food. Next time you should try and insert it in a way were it is not blurry, but good job on trying. Great work! Kind regards Italy

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